this is a story by pierre and hannah roche
the arthur has used similes
i dont like it how he uses the boaring words
i like it how he added more animiles in story
i dont like it how the story goes happy then unhappy
i like it how they used a ritoricill thing
i dont like it how theres to many pudles in this story
its funny how the arthur draws the people
the arthur writed so many good stuf
i like it how he puted clothes on them because it will be rued to put them naked
i dont like it how the arthur puted to many people out side because they will get sick and soggie outside
what i like about the story i them being happy at the end so im going to give them a 1.1
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